Sunday, August 14, 2011

P.I.

TERM 2 P.I.

Expert
Shows weeks of work
 Audience is very interested
 I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
 Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
 Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression

Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Information is interesting and in my own words
 Adults have supported me without doing work for me
 Some humour (?)
 Some interaction with the audience
 Audience is attentive and interested
Speech is clear

Apprentice
 Shows about a week’s work
 A little information – some in my own words
 Adults have done some of the work for me
 No interaction with the audience
No humour
 Poor presentation
 Few picturesMostly reads the info from the presentation

Novice
 Reads the words on the presentationClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
 Parents have done a lot of it for me
 No pictures or steps
 Copied straight off the internet
No humour
 Not finished on time
 Untidy presentation
 Speech is not very clear

12 comments:

  1. YOur pi was cool and it was cool how you had all of pictures of your dads adventures. Next time you talk to your dad about other stuff
    Maddi Ana

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  2. good pi Thor. Your dad had heaps of information that was really cool but next time you could not muck around with the wires and maybe listen but apart from that great job.
    Sophie,Sara,Luke,Ty

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  3. Great PI Thor.It was good you got your dad to come in and talk.You have picked a good topic and your dad definitely travels a lot!

    Next time don't read off the screen and know your words better.

    Caitlin and Jaime

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  4. Well done thor.
    Great PI.
    you spoke good and you had heaps of pictures
    But next time maybe you should not interupt your dad

    Natalya

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  5. Well done!

    You spoke loude and clear and you brang some toys. Next time shorten it a little bit because it was long

    Cindy, Alana and Bex

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  6. well done Thor

    you did well with your speaking and had a cool topic

    next time maybe learn your words better and have more pics

    By Linda and hannah

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  7. Cool P.I Thor

    That was interesting you could of practiced more on your words
    From Annaleise and Aidan
    :) :D

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  8. Well done thor on your p.i.
    it was very interisting maybe next time more photos
    from campbell and saul

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  9. Great start Thor, with your big PowerPoint photos and your spoken script different from what we were seeing on the screen. I'm not sure why you needed to have your questions on the screen though. I think you spoke clearly and read fluently. You could have shortened your investigation by a third though. I can understand why you wanted to learn more about your dad. He must bring interesting stories back from all his trips. Good job, Thor.

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  10. nice p.i. i liked how you actually got your dad in you could of spoke a bit clearer next time you could not mumble.
    dont skip words.
    but good P.i i liked how you put some photos of the counteres on. also make sure to check if the words are right.
    from sam camryn cam tom

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  11. Great P.I thor and it was intresting but you need to do better on your qustuions

    CHAZ,HARRY,AIDIE

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  12. It sounds like you did well Thor. I thought it was a great idea to learn more about Dad and what he does at work. Well done and keep working hard.
    Love Mum xx

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