Thursday, June 2, 2011
cross country
Saturday, May 28, 2011
my moment in time
My moment in time
I was steaming out of my body, boiling in my clothes. I was puffed and bored when I did it. It was very smelly like old socks, heavy like bricks. "Come on boys grab a shovel and start digging the dirt out of the traller” said mister Mccaullom. It was long, I was so tired in that time, it was so loud there was screaming, it was wet and sticky everywhere, I was sweating like mad, I was as hungry as a sheep with no food, I was as thirsty like there was no water in sight. Mister Mccaullom watching as all day, ha ha ha I heard. Luca and I what to go home.
The end by Thor
Thursday, May 19, 2011
my moment in time
| My moment in time |
I was steaming out of my body, boiling in my clothes, puffed and bored when I did it. It was very smelly like old socks, heavy like bricks "Come on boys grab a shovel and start digging the dirt out of the traller” said mister Mccaullom. It was long, I was so tired in that time, it was so loud there was screaming, it was wet and sticky everywhere, I was sweating like mad, I was as hungry as a sheep with no food, I was thirsty like there was no water in sight. Mister Mccaullom watching as all day, ha ha ha I heard. Luca and I what to go home.
The end by Thor
Monday, May 2, 2011
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour (?)
Some interaction with the audience
Audience is attentive and interested
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of the work for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few picturesMostly reads the info from the presentation
Novice
Reads the words on the presentationClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear