TERM 2 P.I.
Expert
Shows weeks of work
Audience is very interested
I've done the work myself
Research in my words – with my personality in it
Contains humour(?)
Interaction with the audience
Speech is confident, clear and with action and expression
Practititioner
Shows three or four weeks of work
Information is interesting and in my own words
Adults have supported me without doing work for me
Some humour (?)
Some interaction with the audience
Audience is attentive and interested
Speech is clear
Apprentice
Shows about a week’s work
A little information – some in my own words
Adults have done some of the work for me
No interaction with the audience
No humour
Poor presentation
Few picturesMostly reads the info from the presentation
Novice
Reads the words on the presentationClearly started at the last minute Hardly any info
Parents have done a lot of it for me
No pictures or steps
Copied straight off the internet
No humour
Not finished on time
Untidy presentation
Speech is not very clear
YOur pi was cool and it was cool how you had all of pictures of your dads adventures. Next time you talk to your dad about other stuff
ReplyDeleteMaddi Ana
good pi Thor. Your dad had heaps of information that was really cool but next time you could not muck around with the wires and maybe listen but apart from that great job.
ReplyDeleteSophie,Sara,Luke,Ty
Great PI Thor.It was good you got your dad to come in and talk.You have picked a good topic and your dad definitely travels a lot!
ReplyDeleteNext time don't read off the screen and know your words better.
Caitlin and Jaime
Well done thor.
ReplyDeleteGreat PI.
you spoke good and you had heaps of pictures
But next time maybe you should not interupt your dad
Natalya
Well done!
ReplyDeleteYou spoke loude and clear and you brang some toys. Next time shorten it a little bit because it was long
Cindy, Alana and Bex
well done Thor
ReplyDeleteyou did well with your speaking and had a cool topic
next time maybe learn your words better and have more pics
By Linda and hannah
Cool P.I Thor
ReplyDeleteThat was interesting you could of practiced more on your words
From Annaleise and Aidan
:) :D
Well done thor on your p.i.
ReplyDeleteit was very interisting maybe next time more photos
from campbell and saul
Great start Thor, with your big PowerPoint photos and your spoken script different from what we were seeing on the screen. I'm not sure why you needed to have your questions on the screen though. I think you spoke clearly and read fluently. You could have shortened your investigation by a third though. I can understand why you wanted to learn more about your dad. He must bring interesting stories back from all his trips. Good job, Thor.
ReplyDeletenice p.i. i liked how you actually got your dad in you could of spoke a bit clearer next time you could not mumble.
ReplyDeletedont skip words.
but good P.i i liked how you put some photos of the counteres on. also make sure to check if the words are right.
from sam camryn cam tom
Great P.I thor and it was intresting but you need to do better on your qustuions
ReplyDeleteCHAZ,HARRY,AIDIE
It sounds like you did well Thor. I thought it was a great idea to learn more about Dad and what he does at work. Well done and keep working hard.
ReplyDeleteLove Mum xx